[Critique Group 2] Through Love Transformed.docx-For 11-21-22 Group-2 session./BC

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Through Love Transformed

C Brad Corallo

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Well met, my wild and gentle one

with radiance like the emerging sun 

 

I tasted the strength with which you yearn

I touched the fire in which you burn

 

You may be a prize, bright yet unknown

a tarnished bell, with a golden tone 

 

Yet there is so much more you must discover

Essential truths over which you hover 

 

Lie down with me and I'll teach you of love

For you have not yet learned the touch of the dove 

 

With the gift of tenderness, we shall begin

a place where I sense you have never been

 

Together as one, we will endeavor to fashion

a primary nature of deep compassion 

 

Then share freely, of all you've been taught

and go forth in the world, your learning has wrought

 

NOTE: inspired by the timeless, delicate beauty of Nick Drake's music 

 

jamesstarfire at gmail.com

 

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