[Critique Group 2] Fwd: Fwd: FW: critique group two for 3-31-22 poem

[Alice Massa]

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Date: 	Wed, 30 Mar 2022 22:40:44 -0500
From: 	Alice Massa <alicejmassa at gmail.com>
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Subject: 	FW: critique group two for 3-31-22 poem
Date: 	Wed, 2 Mar 2022 11:58:54 -0600
From: 	Valerie Moreno <spiritwind at pmpmail.com>
To: 	tuchyner5 at aol.com, spiritwind at pmpmail.com, jamesstarfire at gmail.com, 
Joan Myles <jmyles63 at gmail.com>, alicejmassa at gmail.com



Present

You are present
sunshine warming ,
even behind clouds.

I know your voice
through rushing winds
with waters too high.

I listen from distance
that can only reached
by the sound of your name
or dream visit you make.

Love present,
soft, clear
remains beyond flows in
ribbons of silver light forever.
All the darkness in the world cannot extinguish the light of one candle.
-Saint Francis of Assisi
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spiritwind at pmpmail.com


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