[Critique Group 2] reminder

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Hi group2,  
Just a reminder that your pieces are due today. Mine is below.------

Sorrows River 




 


Take a stroll around the mourning river. 



See how the weeping willows droop their leaves 



in sorrow as the river murmurs by,



filled with heartache for long-lost lonely love. 



And feel the clouds brimming with darkened sadness. 



Hear her grief-stricken whispering sounds,



as she passes slowly in her journey. 




 


Launch your boat on this brooding brook.



Pursue this onerous journey to the end.



Find out if there are any returns 



for the tears which have been painfully shed. 




 


Perhaps the soul has been enriched. 



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