[Critique Group 2] reminder

[James Rock]

HiGroup-2,
I can respond to emails and even send new emails. However I still
can't retrieve past emails. So I will not be in the next session.
Still working on getting a new computer. My computer guy is
outstanding and doesn't even charge me, the problem is getting a hold
of him.
Best, Brad

On 6/21/22, Leonard Tuchyner via Group2 <group2 at bluegrasspals.com> wrote:
> Hi group 2,
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> Just a reminder that your submissions are due tomorrow. Mine is below
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> Lazy Bay
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> It was a lazy Day on  BiscayneBay
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> to take my modest boat for a sail --
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> my craft, sails and gear tied tightly
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> to  the top of  a Volkswagen bus.
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> We left early after Sunrise
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> for mild waters on this quiet day.
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> I carried the vessel overhead,
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> barefoot on a seaweed strewn shore,
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> and set the mast and boom in place --
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> Pulled my craft into crystal clear water.
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> Finally, dropped dagger board and rudder,
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> And sailed away on a northerly tac.
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> The soft offshore breeze was steady.
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> Bay seas were brisk but relaxing.
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> As Sun rises and temperature climbs,
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> wind fails to fill the vessel’s sails.
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> Sporadic blows occasionally flow
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> from Sol’s peekaboo game with playful clouds,
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> and my sailboat takes off a-running,
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> settling down, after the ride , to stillness.
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> In these times of absolute quiet,
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> one’s soul and mind are stilled as well.
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> Nothing stirs  butgentle ripples.
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> Within these interludes, all is peace.
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> The flow of seaweed measures time.
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> From bow to stern, it moves slowly.
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> Sails are slack yet time moves forward.
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> Time has all the time it ever needs,
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> and I have untold time to reach my home.
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> Leonard I. Tuchyner, Author
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> https://www.dldbooks.com/tuchyner/
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