[Critique Group 2] group 2 critique sub 8-25-22

[Valerie Moreno]

Summer Fruit





One sweet taste 


brings cool escape


to a worry-soaked day.





The smooth, tart texture


reminds me of simple


summer days when


time waited and there 


was enough left for daydreams.





Now, taste and memory 


mingle in my 


tiny kitchen,


softly creating new pleasure

gentle, true.

Valerie Moreno

*disregard "Clare" poem--this is group 2 sub for 8-25-22
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