[Critique Group 2] To Alice (Val's piece"

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From: Valerie Moreno <spiritwind at pmpmail.com>
To: tuchyner5 at aol.com; spiritwind at pmpmail.com; jamesstarfire at gmail.com; Joan Myles <jmyles63 at gmail.com>; alicejmassa at gmail.com
Sent: Mon, Oct 18, 2021 8:03 pm
Subject: FW: critique group two, poem for 10-28-21


October

By: Valerie Moreno

Your crisp night air
made me shiver
in the silent parking area--
I'd forgotten a sweater.

The chill came from within
as the stretcher rattled on pavement--
in my whole being--
as the funeral director took you
away.
_______
spiritwind at pmpmail.com
"All the darkness in the world cannot extinguish the light of one
candle."
 St. Francis Of Assisi

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