[Critique Group 2] Fwd: Leonard's comments on Joan's sub

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

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From: tuchyner5 at aol.com
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Sent: Mon, Aug 30, 2021 1:35 pm
Subject: Leonard's comments on Joan's sub


This is a clarion call for humans to pay attention. 
 
To become stewards instead of users. 
 
The ecology is falling apart. 
 
We have been warned, but we have not heard. 
 
Will there  be onlytears to  answer our greed andnegligence? 
 
This is an extremely powerful  poem. 
 
Who is Julian.
 
  
 
Joans sub for august 21
 
  
 
  
 
Julian's Prophecy
 
by Joan Myles
 
  
 
the angels were right he said
 
the world would be better off
 
without humans
 
  
 
his words echoed through the sanctuary
 
a mere youth we smiled
 
he will learn
 
  
 
and the years rolled by
 
and the forests burned
 
and the sky withheld its blessings
 
  
 
rain and snow and dew
 
the birds fell silent
 
and the air crackled with heat
 
  
 
the boy was right we wept
 
but there was only dust
 
 where our eyes should have been
 
  
 
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