[Critique Group 2] Joan for July

[Joan Myles]

Darling Friends,


I can't wait to delve into meaning among you dear people.

Blessings,

Joan


**

Hanging


I can’t distinguish

Windows from watermelons

Since both disclose rain

I can’t distinguish

Words from soap bubble currents

Since both float away

I can’t distinguish

Happiness from meteors

>From broccoli soup

I can only hang

>From tree branches to witness

The world as it is
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