[Critique Group 2] Fwd: FW: critique group two piece for 2-27-20

[Alice Massa]

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Subject: 	FW: critique group two piece for 2-27-20
Date: 	Fri, 14 Feb 2020 18:00:53 -0600
From: 	Valerie Moreno <spiritwind at pmpmail.com>
To: 	tuchyner5 at aol.com, spiritwind at pmpmail.com, jamesstarfire at gmail.com, 
ajm321kh at wi.rr.com, Joan Myles <jmyles63 at gmail.com>







Resigned







I throw my hands high--



once again, you steal momentum,



letting me know you're smarter,



classy, much above the life cut.







I don't buy you're


smug, precise convictions with yourself as



glowing star.







Again, I wonder who you


really are, beneeth the cool,



yet merky control.





Too sweet, your words are even,


fixed in place like ice cubes


squarely contained. Strange to think

your world hasn't moved or reshaped

one inch.



Are you satisfied? Resigned?

It baffles me and makes me crazy,

like screaming in a hall of

beveled mirrors.

Valerie Moreno
______
Love God. Serve God. Everything is in that.
-St. Clare of Assisi, 1194-1253


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