[Critique Group 2] Joan's REAL Feb piece

[Joan Myles]

Darling Friends,

Please accept this as my real piece for discussion in February. You know I
like to get us talking, right? Well the first poem was just too simple for
my purposes. Thanks for understanding!
Joan
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Reflections

Yes my head is in the clouds

And  my feet reside there too

My eyes are another matter entirely

My eyes are fixed on the mirror

Suspended in mid air

And etched into the moon’s face

Clouds shift and configure themselves

According to the wind and rain

And my reflections

Configure me
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