[Critique Group 2] Val's piece forAlice

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Images

 

 

 

Images swirl infloating color,

 

bright, grey,dark--

 

who will see thereal story

 

buried in theflowing changes?

 

 

 

Will heart andsoul survive

 

the dizzymerry-go-round,

 

 inuendo and trust wage terbulant war games.

 

So hard to seeeven lines

in scrawledabbreviations of truth

running likewatercolor uncertainty.

 

If possible, wewill hold on,

hope, prayer,perserverence flickers

like a smallcandle breaking through.

 

Valerie Moreno
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