[Critique Group 2] May submission

Joan Myles jmyles63 at gmail.com
Fri May 10 11:53:25 EDT 2019


Greetingngs Poetry Pals,

I've had a few challenges this time since my computer died on Monday, and
many of my pieces are locked inside. So I am submitting one of my poems
inclded in my book, One With Willows.

dThanks for your thoughtful commentary.

Joan

****Fringes

during these dark winter days
light clings to the fringes

holy by contrast
shimmering from the edges of storm clouds

splashes its singular message
along windblown alleys and dusty gutters

 its vibrating glow
spreads from the corners of my prayer shawl

down my sleeves
into my hands and fingers

igniting the words I trace
a single digit

One
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