[Critique Group 2] Emailing: Music and memory-for 11/28/17 critique session

[James]

Music and memory
C By Brad Corallo
Word count 133
Stepping into the shower this morning
to the liquid strains of Pastorale,
the awareness of profound loss, 
fell upon me like a familiar, tattered garment.
The bitter-sweet strains
both tore, and comforted. 
How perverse the human heart.
So much self work
to move on;
and I have.
I truly have! 
Yet these moments, far less frequent
can still shake the very pillars of my wounded consciousness, 
and Shatter the Sun.
For a moment or two, before
with the water of my cleansing;
they are lost in the nonjudgmental, swirling, ever receiving drain. 


NOTE: "Pastorale, music of nature and grace" is a 1997 acoustic music CD by
Eric Tingstad & Nancy Rumbel. It was profound background to the tragically
lost relationship with my beloved.

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