[Critique Group 2] realization

[Alice Massa]

Dear Group Two writers,


     How the air and my head does clear after a series of storms (which 
Milwaukee experienced yesterday afternoon and evening)! When the final 
rumbles of thunder were rolling over the lake around midnight, I had a 
revelation!  In my poem, I used the word "shutter," but of course, meant 
and should have used the word "shudder."  (Double "d" as in "dog" should 
have been typed.) Naturally, good old Spellcheck could not be of help 
with this error.  When I had this realization, I was completely away 
from my computer--upstairs, brushing my teeth actually.  I imagine all  
of you have experienced these types of editing after-thoughts. Through 
the years, I certainly have had such revelations--if only the 
enlightenments came sooner.  Please excuse this error!  I shudder at the 
thought of making such a goof!


Until next Tuesday or my next enlightenment--Alice

ajm321kh at wi.rr.com