[Critique Group 2] Val's submission for Tuesday

[Tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Just in case you haven't received Val's submission, it is below.
 
Leonard 
 
 
  
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 From: spiritwind at pmpmail.com
To: tuchyner5 at aol.com, spiritwind at pmpmail.com,  jamesstarfire at gmail.com, 
ajm321kh at wi.rr.com, abbie at mysero.net
Sent:  7/21/2017 8:35:01 A.M. Eastern Daylight Time
Subj: FW: critique Gr2  7-4-17


Quiet Things
VM 7-4-17

Summer
air conditioner  humming
endless heat

After housework
light meal
listening to  audio book

cat snuggles 
I call a line
play Bingo
interactive  trivia

chat with friends,
listen to music,
audio-described  movie

Voice messages from all around the 
USA, Canada,  Austrailia
friendships blossom
lots of laughter too.

I cherish  voices over the phone,
cat snuggled by my leg
as we play skunk, Bingo,  trivia--
these quiet times are blessed.
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I let my music take me  where my heart wants to go
-Yusuf/Cat  Stevens


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