[Critique Group 2] My Notes for Alice's Piece

[Abbie Taylor]

Alice, watch your continued usage of the words “velvet” and “night.” I 
think they’re too redundant. Instead of “creatively write,” try 
“painting with words.” I think you’ll find that more effective. 
Otherwise, it’s good. I like your comparison between walking and writing.

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