[Critique Group 2] My Notes for Brad's Piece

[Abbie Taylor]

Brad, I love the imagery in this poem. Be careful when submitting this 
for publication. In order to publish song lyrics, you must have 
permission from the song’s publisher, and that can be hard to get. 
Instead of including the lyrics, you might want to either paraphrase 
the song or talk about how a summer breeze makes you feel.

-- 
Abbie Johnson Taylor, Author http://abbiescorner.wordpress.com
http://www.abbiejohnsontaylor.com
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