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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72" style='word-wrap:break-word'><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>3292023 Critique session<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Sally<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>WINTER’S FINALE<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>As always,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Poignant, capturing a time and place with rich detail that makes us shiver and drink the scent of flowers. A beautiful rendering of a complex yet simple scene.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Leonard<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'>Walking With Nature <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'>Catches the brutality of winter and the balance of mioving through the bitter cold and keeping moving in it.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'>Excellent work.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cleora<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The Caregiver<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>by Sly Duck<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Feels paranoid. Your anger seems to focus on her ineptitude and comes across as hostile. Needs to be tightened up. It is too long and belabors the feeling of helplessness. Technology seems as much a part of the process as does her mistakes.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Marcia<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:1.0in'>Wake Up!<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:1.0in'>Marcia J. Wick<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>432wordsWell crafted and reasoned. I can’t find anything that needs revisions.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>Warm Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>DQN</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-ligatures:none'>DeAnna Quietwater Noriega<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-ligatures:none'>Cell: 573-544-3511<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-ligatures:none'>Email: <a href="mailto:dqnoriega@gmail.com"><span style='color:#0563C1'>dqnoriega@gmail.com</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-ligatures:none'>Author of <i>Fifty Years of Walking with Friends<o:p></o:p></i></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><i><span style='mso-ligatures:none'>https://www.dldbooks.com/dqnoriega/</span></i><span style='mso-ligatures:none'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>