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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72" style='word-wrap:break-word'><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'>Marcia<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>Chapter 19<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>Frozen Out<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>The plot advances. Anyone at Millwood might know Veronica’s itinerary or find it out including Pete as night watchman. Hard to see how they could get a note delivered to her room though. I didn’t stay much in hotels back then, so maybe the desk would deliver it to her room rather than wait for her to check at the desk for messages. I guess that leaving voice-mail on the phone would be out of the question. I suppose they used a switchboard to connect calls to the room phone, but would need the room number. It isn’t likely that a message given over a phone to the front desk would be passed along if it was threatening.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal> One minor typo, (<span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>would she actually threaten Veronica wit harm?”) needs an H to make it with harm instead of, wit harm.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cleora<o:p></o:p></p><p>Shy Bird<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Your program is running words together in several places. I am wondering if the line length on your wordpad isn’t matching up with that in your email client. Whatever the cause, there are numerous instances two words are run together. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The sentence (Its diet normally consistsof insects) should start with the word Their diet.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Interesting piece. Curious bird aficionados want to know if their call sounds like (meep-meep,) like in the cartoons?<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'><br></span>Leonard,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'>Affinity for Sailing <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'>Charming, but needs some work on run-on sentences.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Sally<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>This piece needs a title.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>When young we day-dream about our futures. Perhaps when we are old, we dream about our pasts. Perhaps this is Twilight-dreaming?<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal> A poignant poem of shared contentment’s.<span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'><br><br></span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>DeAnna Quietwater Noriega<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cell: 573-544-3511<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Email: <a href="mailto:dqnoriega@gmail.com"><span style='color:#0563C1'>dqnoriega@gmail.com</span></a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Author of <i>Fifty Years of Walking with Friends<o:p></o:p></i></p><p class=MsoNormal><i>https://www.dldbooks.com/dqnoriega/</i><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>