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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72" style='word-wrap:break-word'><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Leonard,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Dogs and Water<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Charming stories about unique dogs. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The first sentence doesn’t work unless you change it a bit. (<span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black'>April was the only dog who would rather have swum than walked.) Try (April was a dog who would rather swim than walk.)<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Well written.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Marcia<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>Chapter 18<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>The Investigation<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>Typo: I think you meant lot instead of lost in the second line.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>Didn’t you mention that the factory had more than one shift? Shouldn’t there be cars from shift workers unless this is a smaller lot reserved for the administration wing with other ones for line workers on a different side of the complex?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>Otherwise, this chapter is a bit slow but progresses the story.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>DeAnna Quietwater Noriega<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cell: 573-544-3511<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Email: <a href="mailto:dqnoriega@gmail.com"><span style='color:#0563C1'>dqnoriega@gmail.com</span></a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Author of <i>Fifty Years of Walking with Friends<o:p></o:p></i></p><p class=MsoNormal><i>https://www.dldbooks.com/dqnoriega/</i><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>