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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Deanna,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Thanks for your comments. Are you sending your notes early because you won’t be on the August call?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Marcia<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b>From:</b> Group1 [mailto:group1-bounces@bluegrasspals.com] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Deanna Noriega<br><b>Sent:</b> Friday, August 19, 2022 6:03 PM<br><b>To:</b> Marcia Wick <marciajwick@gmail.com><br><b>Cc:</b> Critique Group 1 <group1@bluegrasspals.com><br><b>Subject:</b> [Critique Group 1] Critiques for August 2022<o:p></o:p></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Marcia,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The only thing I could find to correct was: “the call was costing me six dollars a minutes, there shouldn’t be an S on minutes. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I am not sure this chapter advances the story much, except to give a little background color to why Veronica seems shallow. She learned to take care of herself first from her mother. Good work.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Sally,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Repair n organ, needs an a before the letter n.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>DeAnna Quietwater Noriega<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cell: 573-544-3511<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Email: <a href="mailto:dqnoriega@gmail.com">dqnoriega@gmail.com</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Author of <i>Fifty Years of Walking with Friends<o:p></o:p></i></p><p class=MsoNormal><i><a href="https://www.dldbooks.com/dqnoriega/">https://www.dldbooks.com/dqnoriega/</a></i><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>