[Critique Group 1] Sally's May submission 12 lines

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                                                          MAY 13

Strength diminished year by year,

with anger masking sadness,

he watched his world grow ever smaller

until its moon stopped mid-orbit

and its sun chose not to rise.

 

Four years on, she smiles and lifts a glass

in memory of the sweet, funny man

she married so long ago and promised

to love in sickness and in health.

 

 

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