[Critique Group 1] Reminder

[Leonard Tuchyner]

Hi  group1,
Just a reminder that pieces are due Wednesday. Mine is below.
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Walking With Nature  

 

The weather I walk in is bitterly chilly, 

falling in various forms of wetness. 

Sometimes it splatters with rain, sleet and snow. 

Then veers into clinging frigid fog 

that penetrates deep into my being. 

 

I slog along with hands dug deep in pockets, 

head bowed against the squally cold wind,

shoulders hunched to preserve the precious warmth. 

 

Shrouded in perfect isolation, 

I somehow feel protected contentment, 

as though those qualities swaddle me 

in a lover’s passionate embrace, 

whispering, “You are one with Mother Earth.”




 
 
Leonard I. Tuchyner, Author
 
https://www.dldbooks.com/tuchyner/

 
  
 
 

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