[Critique Group 1] Cleora's submission

[Marcia Wick]

Her submission is only three lines.

 

Version 1:

scores of tiny feet

a satellite home in mind

chose my house as home

 

Version 2:

tiny acrobats 

seeking a satellite home

decide on my tree

 

Marcia

From: sanford.rosenthal at comcast.net [mailto:sanford.rosenthal at comcast.net] 
Sent: Tuesday, February 21, 2023 7:53 AM
To: group1 at bluegrasspals.com; sitting.duck at springmail.com; 'Marcia Wick'
<marciajwick at gmail.com>; 'Deanna Noriega' <dqnoriega at gmail.com>; 'Leonard
Tuchyner' <tuchyner5 at aol.com>
Subject: Cleora's submission

 

Both of the emails from Cleora are missing the submission.  All they have
are a line or two.  There are no attachments or links.  Has anyone gotten
the submission?  If so, could you please forward it to me?

Thanks,

Sally

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