[Critique Group 1] Sally's July submission very late and very short

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Mon Jul 25 19:58:17 EDT 2022


                                           RECOVERY

 

The idleness of illness

envelopes my aging body,

cushioning its frailty

in sweet oblivion.

The world's persistent entropy

stops mid-spin and quiets

to match my slow and steady breathing.

 

 
By Sally Rosenthal

 

 

 

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