[Critique Group 1] Leonard's comments on Sally's sub.

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Can’t think of a single word to change. 



This might also be entitled, “How to  Get Through Coved.” 



Reading is an escape portal. 



Simply and elegantly written.




 


Sally sub for Jan. 22




 



 



                            TIME TRAVEL



 



 



Tucked safely away



in the zippered compartment



of an old quilted handbag



on a closet’s top shelf,



my expired passport seems 



none the worse for the wear



it had in bygone days



when my late husband and I



saw dreams realized as planes  



touched down on foreign soil.



 



I travel light these days,



needing no passport or luggage



or neighbor to feed my cat.



Now, years from the past,



I journey alone through books



And keep dear memories alive.



 



                                                                       By Sally Rosenthal



 



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