[Critique Group 1] reminder

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Hi group1,
Today's the day. Time to submit your work. Mine is below.------

Rivanna River Song









Lazy river roaming



through sultry starlit night, 
In early summer gloaming,
a ribbon of shimmering moonlight.





Across the river in forest womb,
a whippoorwill sings his dulcet tune 



to the pale floating summer moon.

The gentle moan of a mourning dove



ghosts its way out of shadowed woods



and slides smoothly within the river’s mist.
Then, softly passes by and sails away.

>From hundreds of arboreal seats



tree frogs watch and ardently cheep.



Their surrounding chorus embraces me,



lost in their torrid nightly spree.




Sitting on a high rocky bank,



I’m balanced on the bonny brink, 
finding myself in water flow.



I watch my sacred soul slip free. 





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