[Critique Group 1] reminder of submissions due + my submission

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Hi group 1,

Our pieces are due today. Mine is below. Have fun.

Leonard
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130 words
Deep star Sixed 


 



 


Crackle, bang, clang, sneeze, cough and wheeze 

What’s that? Who knows? A blowing nose?

Oh hell, who dropped their telephone?

For Pete’s sake, is that a dog’s bark?

Is that the sound that rhymes with bark?


 


Come on folks, this is no joke.

The noises you make aren’t cute.

How hard is it to learn to mute?

Our guest   thinkswe’re a sorry group.


 


I’m giving you all fair warning.

If you choose not to go silent,

I’m prepared to be violent.

I’ll render you dumb and speechless,

redundant though that line may be.

Tone down or you’re going to drown.

Believe me, Just one more sound.


 


“Squeak.”


 


Okay!”


 


Epilog:


 


Host of Behind Our Eyes conference call given life sentencefor pushing the red mute button. Permanently muted, none of the participantshave been heard from since. 
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