[Critique Group 1] Submissions due tomorrow and my sub below

[tuchyner5 at aol.com]

Hi group1,
As I says in the subject line, our submissions are due tomorrow and my poem is below. 

Also, I want to pursue the subject of gaining  a new member and/or moderator.  Our BOE membership has grown and I believe it is time to develop a new  critique group called group3. For a while, at least, It will require my time and effort to deliver the new baby. Please e mail me or call me directly with your ideas. My phone is: 434 973 7632.

Thanks 

Leonard 
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Ode to Flaw 




 




Gyroscope spins in perfect balance 



on a flawless flat level,



in an impeccable universe.




 




Anger, understanding, fear and faith 



love, hate, passion and tranquility,



all competitions held in balance,



form the celestial spinning wheel.




 




Moves in stillness without notice.



The dweller lives in consummate peace,



Stability needs no direction,



a world replete within itself.




 




One element slips out of balance.



Whirligig slides down slippery slope,



following its new imperfection.



Internal dweller pays attention,



no more in eternal simple bliss,



discomforted by imperfection,



and now able to fall in love.




 




A flawed path is a learning path.



A living river may twist and twine,



but never runs in pristine circles.




 




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