[Critique Group 1] submission for Session 3.

[kathryngc at juno.com]

Yes, I found the same thing Mary Jo dound. The format that comes in the
e-mail, doesn't match what I sent you.
Oh well, try to critique on the story, not the format.
Happy Writing,
Kate

Kate Chamberlin
kathryngc at juno.com
"Dream it. Write it. Read it."
www.katechamberlin.com

On Tue, 18 Oct 2016 22:23:02 -0400 "Magnets and Ladders"
<magnetsandladders at comcast.net> writes:
Hi, Here is a poem for next week’s session. I’ll also attach a word
document, since my stanza breaks didn’t come through correctly for
session 1.
 
Mary-Jo
 
Community Radio
 
Keep this station programmed in your car.
It will be a valuable resource, 
should an emergency arise.
Should there be a: 
storm, drought, flood, or high winds.
Should there be: 
wild fires, a terrorist attack, a serial killer on the loose or a massive
power outage.
 
We will inform you of any and all
necessary preparative actions
that should be taken and evacuation routs, 
even if you have lost all means of communication or reception and
our tower has been destroyed and
we are reduced to static.
 
Keep this station programmed in your car.
During a nonemergency, 
we will broadcast the weather, brought to you by
The National Weather Service.
We will only interrupt this broadcast
when they are reporting today's weather, or
projected conditions for the week.
We will preempt the forecast with an announcement touting all of the
valuable information this station will report to city residents and
visitors
in case of an emergency, 
followed by a portion of the mayor's speech from last year.
 
As the weather broadcast returns, your car heads
out of town and we
fade to static.
  
 


Kate Chamberlin
kathryngc at juno.com
"Dream it. Write it. Read it."
www.katechamberlin.com

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