[RWP] All my thanks for your precious help. What do you think of this first try?

[ROBIN Alexis]

Dear all,

During this last month half, I asked you a lot of questions. First I 
have to thank you, because it was my very starting with Reaper and DAW 
software in general and despite that, you were patient.

At this point, here comes my first beginning project. If you have a 
couple of minute to hear it, you should tell me the major defect and way 
to improve this first try.
I have  aprecise idea about the big problem in this introduction, but 
don't want influence you hearing, so I let you discover the problem in 
this Latin style music.

Link to listen:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/kulytsekonnitay/Coeur%20Corps.mp3?dl=0

Thank you for your advices,

Alexis ROBIN