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<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><font size=3
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Critiques for 8-23-18
Group 2 session <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>1. Val’s piece:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>Yes, and would that open dialogue between Arabs, Christians and Jews
could be as fruitful. A vivid depiction of the “holy man, child of
God/madman.” As always, your poems are like paintings of life. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>*** <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>2. Abbie’s piece:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>Wow, what a world-class bitch your teacher was. Were you in Catholic
school? I agree, you should have thrown up on her. A bit of a different type of
Abbie piece. It is stark, real and disturbing which was hopefully your intention.
<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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12.0pt'>***<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>3. Leonard’s pieces:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>I shall comment on poems 2 & 3 or “12 line” &
“18” line:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>The first of these is a polished beautifully cut gem picture of an autumn
day. It stands on its own as well as being part of a greater whole.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'> The next one carries the theme of the cycle of dying, death rebirth
and flourishing. An ancient and archetypal basic rhythm of the Earth and our
mutual interdependence. Would that more of our species might love and serve her
as she deserves as opposed to plundering and squandering her many gifts.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>***<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>4. <st1:City w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">Alice</st1:place></st1:City>’s
piece:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>A beautiful and charming memory of childhood and the enduring nature of
wild violets gathered in a wood and flourishing in the lifescape of home. Very
vivid and evocative. However do I since a new book taking shape: that might be
called “Recollection Puzzle of a Heartland home?”<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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