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<td>FW: [Critique Group 1] Leonard's submission for June</td>
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<td>Thu, 21 Jun 2018 21:20:25 -0400</td>
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<td>Sally Rosenthal <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:sanford.rosenthal@comcast.net"><sanford.rosenthal@comcast.net></a></td>
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<td><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:ajm321kh@wi.rr.com">ajm321kh@wi.rr.com</a></td>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Alice,
Leonard just called me. His computer got fried during a
storm. The earliest his internet will be restored is
Tuesday. He asked me to forward his June submission for
Group 1 to you and asked that you forward it to Group 2
members. He has to use the same piece now for both groups.
Thanks so much.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Sally
Rosenthal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
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Group1 [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:group1-bounces@bluegrasspals.com">mailto:group1-bounces@bluegrasspals.com</a>] <b>On
Behalf Of </b>Leonard Tuchyner via Group1<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, June 20, 2018 11:35 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:sanford.rosenthal@comcast.net">sanford.rosenthal@comcast.net</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Critique Group 1 <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:group1@bluegrasspals.com"><group1@bluegrasspals.com></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Critique Group 1] Leonard's submission for
June<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Plastic Kills<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">Plastic, often made of oily smut,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:black">fashion-able into many forms<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:black">and myriads of dispositions,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:black">useful in multitudinous ways.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:black">Beware! once made, it is here to stay.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:black"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">Over our world, this plastic reigns,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">as did they, from whence this
offspring came --<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">flora and fauna pressed to slime,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">squeezed into coal and diamonds as
sublime,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
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style="color:black">shining like stars hidden from sight<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">millions and millions of years ago.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">Today it befouls our Earth <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">in every open space and crevasse,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
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style="color:black">all the land and sky, oceans and
streams,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:black">eaten by beasts, fish and fowl,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
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style="color:black">polluting their hormones and organs,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black">while passing through, but rarely
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style="color:black"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:black">Yesterday I spied two golden beads --<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:black">Once vibrant pollinating bumble bees,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:black">who died in my greenhouse, meant to
spur life,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
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style="color:black">sandwiched between two clear plastic
panes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
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style="color:black">where they drained their scant life
energy<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
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style="color:black">in frantic spasms of hope to fly free.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="color:black"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
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style="color:black">Why do they remind me of me?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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