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<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><font size=3
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>7/25/17 Group 2 critique
session<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>1. Val’s piece:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>An evocative piece that creates a space and feeling of quiet things. It
also describes things I do or have done together which are quiet, peaceful and immensely
enjoyable. But what is the game “Skunk?”<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>2. Leonard’s piece:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>I think this piece is very beautiful! I hope your life really does feel
like this on many nights. The first four lines of the second verse are magic
visual imagery. The uncomplicated, comforting sharing of evening turning to
night and stealing over the land with a beloved animal is a feeling like no
other. One to be cherished, marveled at and captured in a piece such as this.
Kudos!<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>3. Abbie’s piece:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>This is a very well written and constructed piece. Even more I found an
intangible feeling of inevitable destiny in it. Certainly it is geared more to
the female sensibility. I must say, I am not a Bobby Joe fan. First, he really
has no idea what he is committing to. Second a guy who lets his cell phone run
out of power and his car run out of gas when he has a near to giving birth
girlfriend is not an impressive catch in my opinion. Maryellen would do better
to put her trust in Agnes and Kim. They have struggled against an ignorant and
judgmental world and have been quite successful to some degree at least.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>4. <st1:City w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">Alice</st1:place></st1:City>’s
Piece:<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:
12.0pt'>A word picture memory piece that nicely shows the fascinating way the
mind can create a poem through memory, visualization, connection all leading to
crystallization. I wish you had bought an orchid to wear, sniff and touch. This
very pictorial piece might have been given even more sensory magic.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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