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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72" style='word-wrap:break-word'><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Sally,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Beatufilly written, as always. It left me feeling sad though. I hope you begin moving forward, one small step at a time. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Marcia,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I liked both of these. They seem more akin to prose poetry. Good use of language, leaving an aftertaste of sadness.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The second piece seems to end abruptly with the word “there” did you intend to say more? I wonder what ads will begin appearing on faceBook. I was startled when I got an ad on mine that wanted to sell me a T-shirt that said, “Just a California girl, living in a Missouri world. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Leonard,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The forkatting on the copy I received made it hard to determine whether this was divied into stanzas with the last c ontaining only one line.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Shouldn’t you end with punctuation?<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cleora,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Generalizations are stated which I think would depend on the training and experience of individuals rather than gender based differences.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I think you may have a typo in the line:<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Many women, I’m know, do the same quality of work as a man<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Perhaps it should read:<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Many women, I know,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>DeAnna Quietwater Noriega<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cell: 573-544-3511<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Email: <a href="mailto:dqnoriega@gmail.com"><span style='color:#0563C1'>dqnoriega@gmail.com</span></a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Author of <i>Fifty Years of Walking with Friends<o:p></o:p></i></p><p class=MsoNormal><i>https://www.dldbooks.com/dqnoriega/</i><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>