<div style="font-size:10pt;font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;color:black;"><div style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:10pt;color:black;"><br><br><br>-----Original Message-----<br>From: tuchyner5@aol.com<br>To: group2@bluegrasspals.com <group2@bluegrasspals.com><br>Sent: Sat, Oct 10, 2020 10:53 am<br>Subject: Leonard's comments on Marcia's work for Sept<br><br></div><div id="yiv1096337130"><div style="font-size:10pt;font-family:arial, helvetica, sans-serif;color:black;"><p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><b><u><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">This piece was impossible to read without the commas. </span></u></b></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><b><u><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">That why I guess you put the word enjambment<span style="">  </span>in the title. </span></u></b></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><b><u><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">It was an eye-opener to me Actually, </span></u></b></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><b><u><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">It was an accurate description of the news in the last
month.. </span></u></b></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;"> </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">Martia’s sub for Sept 20</span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;"> </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">September Snow – with enjambment?</span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">Marcia J. Wick, The Write Sisters</span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">September 2020</span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">Word Count:  120 / 29 lines</span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;"> </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;"> </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">In Colorado, snow in October often coats </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">Goblins and Halloween pumpkins; the first </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">snow fell this year in September, one </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">Day after Labor Day, one </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">Day after record high heat, two </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">days after wildfires exploded </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">west of the mountains raining </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">ash on diners distanced </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">socially outdoors, reluctant </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">to move indoors risking</span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">contact with a virus oblivious </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">to my daughter’s birthday, the holiday </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">weekend, the first opportunity </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">to hug grandchildren in six </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">long months sheltering </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">safe from exposure, hiding </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">from contamination, toxic </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">air spreading, political </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">rhetoric, crazed power </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">mongers, eroding trust, </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">hateful intolerance, violent </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">vigilantes with guns,</span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">out of control, inhumanity, </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">bigotry, division, deadly </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">infection without borders, craven </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">greed, reckless consumption, unrest, </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">confusion, contention, chaos, </span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">climate change, new</span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;">normal September snow.</span></p>

<p class="yiv1096337130MsoNormal" style=""><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:New serif;"># # #</span></p>

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