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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Sally,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Running Free<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>A not uncommon practice,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Awkward phrasing (perhaps, A commonplace occurrence?)<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>And relishing the time before them.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>(They relish all the time before them?)<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Arching? (flinging?)<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Love the line,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>(They race along eternity’s shore.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Marcia,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Old Memories<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I liked the double meaning in the title.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I couldn’t find any places that need to be changed.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Poignant, thought journey.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I loved the line,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>He forgets, but I rmember.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Leonard<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>First Sleigh Ride<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>2<sup>nd</sup> stanza,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>1<sup>st</sup> and 2<sup>nd</sup> lines both contin the word “just”<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Perhaps change I don’t know just how old I was. To I don’t recall how old I was.This would retain the same number of syllables and remove one of the word “Just” from such close proximity.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I like the poem <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cleora<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Prejudice and Bigotry<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Percy Bissh Shellyey should be spelled Percy Bisshe Shelley<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Fond over should perhaps b fawn over.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Typo, thes should be these<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I think the lost letter e follows the exclamination point.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>“ecano prejudice” needs to letter o’s “econo prejudice”<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>DeAnna<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>