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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><a name="OLE_LINK1"></a><a name="OLE_LINK2"><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'><o:p> </o:p></span></a></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>Cleora,<o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>Another World<o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>Elective surgeries must wait. Elective needs a capital letter<o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>No kidney transplants, now. (word now, not necessary.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>Can we remove the tumor? Suggest: Can the tumor be removed?<o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>You must wait. Change to I must wait, or That must wait.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>Where All is well. If you want to emphasize “all” perhaps bold or italics.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>Abortions should be capitalized. Misspelled essential.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>She speeds to her ivory tower. She needs a capital.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK2'><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK1'>Let them eat frozen yoghurt. Eat doesn’t need a capital letter.</span></span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><a name="OLE_LINK4">Sally<o:p></o:p></a></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK4'>I didn’t see a title for this poem.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK4'>Perhaps, A cup of tea?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK4'>Lovely as always. Gentle, poignant and with a message of survival and endurance.<o:p></o:p></span></p><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK4'></span><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><a name="OLE_LINK5">Leonard<o:p></o:p></a></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK5'>Two geese?? In the title, the word geese needs a capital letter, but you have a typo of two question marks following the word Geese.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK5'>Whimsical. A few rough spots, but nothing that detracted from the gentle pace. Unless you need it for poetic flow, I would delete the word “named,” in the first line.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK5'>The ducks rarely go beyond this road. Should you say the geese or perhaps fowl?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK5'>Form, changed to way?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK5'>Maintaining their advancing on webbed feet. Perhaps Maintaining their advance on wide webbed feet.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK5'>Spaced out should probably be a compound word, spaced-out<o:p></o:p></span></p><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK5'></span><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><a name="OLE_LINK3">Marcia<o:p></o:p></a></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK3'>My Guitar<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK3'>I couldn’t seem much. Typo, see much<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK3'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK3'>Again, ahead10 years. Perhaps moving ahead with a space between ahead and 10. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-bookmark:OLE_LINK3'>Still needs a bit of polishing, but I liked the progression and the story. Does your guitar now live with your grown-up daughter?</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>