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</font><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><u><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;">This is a wonderful description of Grandpas House. In
describing it, there is a picture painted of a life style . </span></u><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
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</font><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in; text-align: center;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;"> </span><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in; text-align: center;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;">bit. It is now 300 words.</span><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
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</font><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in; text-align: center;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;">Grandpa’s House</span><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in; text-align: center;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;">By DeAnna Quietwater Noriega</span><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
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</font><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><font size="3">The <st1:state w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">Texas</st1:place></st1:state></font><font size="3">
sunset paints the west with reds and orange. Five-year old feet in
Patton-leather shoes tap up the steps to the porch. The screen door squeaks and
they tread the linoleum of the hall. </font></span><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><u><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;">The lines up to this point are particularly artistic.</span></u><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in;"><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">To the left is the big room with the fireplace. Grandma
and grandpa’s room is through there and connects to the dining room beyond. To
the right of the hall, is the locked door to daddy’s brother’s room. He drowned
long </font><a href="http://ago.next/" target="_blank"><font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman" size="3">ago.Next</font></a><font face="Times New Roman" size="3"> to the forbidden
room </font></span><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><u><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;">This puts the story in a class by itself to casually
mention that he died.</span></u><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;">is the room where Pedro, Grandpa’s ranch hand lives. The
strains of his harmonica float out of there. Straight ahead, the bare boards of
the screened porch begin. This is where Grandma’s ringer washing machine and
the basin for washing hands wait. The dining room is the first on the left with
the door to the kitchen next and at the end of the porch is the door to the
room with the toilet. Ducks are gathering out the side door demanding corn.
They come up from the lake which is where the water is piped for the hand
basin, washer and toilet. It also is pumped to fill the stock tank in the front
yard. On hot days, it is fun to splash and play in that concrete tank as if it
is a swimming pool. Lace-trimmed socks are tucked into Sunday shoes,
before they are dropped in the corner of the Living room. Small Apache feet
glory in the freedom and are ready to scamper out to answer the call of the
ducks, or to see if grandma needs them to run fetch a bucket of water from the
rain barrel. The smell of tortillas toasting on the griddle and the slap thump
of them being flipped and rolled flat, drift from the kitchen. </span><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 12pt 0in;"><font size="3"><font face="Times New Roman"><u><span lang="EN" style="color: black; mso-ansi-language: EN;">This brings it into the present by telling what the
children are expected to do , and all the things that go on in the house.</span></u><span lang="EN" style="color: black; font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-ansi-language: EN;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p><font face="Times New Roman" size="3">
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</font><br><br><br>-----Original Message-----<br>From: tuchyner5--- via Group2 <group2@bluegrasspals.com><br>To: tuchyner5 <tuchyner5@aol.com><br>Cc: Critique Group 2 <group2@bluegrasspals.com><br>Sent: Tue, Feb 4, 2020 7:14 pm<br>Subject: [Critique Group 2] (no subject)<br><br></div><div id="yiv7826714109"><div style="color: black; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in;"><u><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman">This
is a wonderful description of Grandpas House. In describing it, there is a
picture painted of a life style .<span> </span></span></span></span></u></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in; text-align: center;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman"> </span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in; text-align: center;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman"> </span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in; text-align: center;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman">bit. It is now 300 words.</span></span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in; text-align: center;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman"> </span></span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in; text-align: center;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman">Grandpa’s House</span></span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in; text-align: center;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman">By DeAnna Quietwater Noriega</span></span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p align="center" class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in; text-align: center;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman"> </span></span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;">The Texas</span><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"> sunset paints the
west with reds and orange. Five-year old feet in Patton-leather shoes tap up
the steps to the porch. The screen door squeaks and they tread the linoleum of
the hall. </span></span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in;"><u><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman">The
lines up to this point are particularly artistic.</span></span></span></u></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman">To
the left is the big room with the fireplace. Grandma and grandpa’s room is
through there and connects to the dining room beyond. To the right of the hall,
is the locked door to daddy’s brother’s room. He drowned long ago.Next to the
forbidden room </span></span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in;"><u><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman">This
puts the story in a class by itself to casually mention that he died.</span></span></span></u></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in;"><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman">is
the room where Pedro, Grandpa’s ranch hand lives. The strains of his harmonica
float out of there. Straight ahead, the bare boards of the screened porch
begin. This is where Grandma’s ringer washing machine and the basin for washing
hands wait. The dining room is the first on the left with the door to the
kitchen next and at the end of the porch is the door to the room with the
toilet. Ducks are gathering out the side door demanding corn. They come up from
the lake which is where the water is piped for the hand basin, washer and
toilet. It also is pumped to fill the stock tank in the front yard. On hot
days, it is fun to splash and play in that concrete tank as if it is a swimming
pool. Lace-trimmed socks are tucked into Sunday shoes, before they are dropped
in the corner of the Living room. Small Apache feet glory in the freedom and
are ready to scamper out to answer the call of the ducks, or to see if grandma
needs them to run fetch a bucket of water from the rain barrel. The smell of
tortillas toasting on the griddle and the slap thump of them being flipped and
rolled flat, drift from the kitchen. </span></span></span></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in;"><u><span lang="EN"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;">This
brings it into the present by telling what<span>
</span></span><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;">the children are expected to do ,</span><span><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;">
</span></span><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;">and all the things that go on in the house.</span></span></span></u></p><span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: medium;" face="Times New Roman">
</span><p class="yiv7826714109msonormal" style="margin: 1em 0in;"><u><span lang="EN"><span style="font-size: medium;" size="3" data-mce-style="font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;" data-mce-style="font-family: Times New Roman;" face="Times New Roman">.
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