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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Leonard,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I don’t like flawless flat level, Perhaps flawless level plain? <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I liked the poem very much.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Sally,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I think you need a period instead of a comma after And gratefully remember so that A cup of ginger tea is clearly a new thought.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I liked this poem very much. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cleora,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I liked the second one, because dapple means flecks of a different color like in a dappled mare or either light or dark against a Different color like dappled sunshine through leaves.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I think the word you meant was dabble. Enain is misspelledand should be inane. In the second one, insain should be spelled as in the first one,insane.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>If you wanted these to be limericks, you need to have the first second and fifth lines the same number of syllables and the third and fourth are shorter. The first, second and fifth lines should rhyme with each other and the third and fourth should also rhyme with each other.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Marcia,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Black cats are not supposed to cross your path, it is people who will have bad luck if the walk under ladders. You did an excellent job of describing her character. Perhaps you should mention the television program to explain her name choice. I understood your ending to mean that it is through losing loved pets that we learn how to accept the death and decline of loved ones, but perhaps this could be made a bit clearer. The ending line was good. The line before it though wasn’t clear. Good essay.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>