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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>I am up and about again, just a bit shaky on my balance. I have a trainer coming on Wednesday from my school to help me address some of my issues with the little coyote. Here are my notes on the last session.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Leonard,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Future of War<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The Mohicans own a casino in New York stqate and a reservation in Wisconsin. I doubt they are large in numbers, but have not ceased to be recognized as an existing tribe.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I am not prone to philosophy, thus found this piece required me to stop and think to grasp each point. Overall, I think the piece makes some valid points in a gentle manner. I don’t understand the need for conflict and didn’t grasp your central point.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Marcia,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Ciara’s First Steps<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I wasn’t comfortable with the line: (bring-out your Dad’s exotic Hispanic side.) Perhaps: (Display your Dad’s exotic Hispanic features or looks.)<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cleora<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Chapter 7 of Sly Duck<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I am still unsure why you begin each new chapter with a recap. In it, you used the word crippled when injured might more politically correct.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The phrase: (blanket of large hail) didn’t seem to fit since hail is a type of weather like rain or snow. You should have used hailstones as you would snowflakes or raindrops.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I wasn’t sure if you had a typo when you wrote (shadow mhail) and meant to write shadow mail.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>In the phrase: (tossed the banner to the commander, who caught it, broke it in half, and threw it on the ground.) Since a banner is usually fabric, perhaps it would work better to say: (tore it in half and tossed it to the ground.)<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>When you had Sitting attack the soldier, you misspelled the part of the foot she bit. The word should be spelled, (heel) and not (heal)<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>You misspelled it twwice in the next sentence as well.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Sally,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Night Wind<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I liked the poem. I don’t see anything I would change. Your poem sare always evocative of a strong feeling or mood. This one evokes a mood of fatigue and colored with pain. The desire to postpone dealing with anything until tomorrow is also evident. I am glad you are feeling able to join us again. Constant pain is draining and can lead to depression which makes it hard to feel able to do anything.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal> <o:p></o:p></p></div></body></html>