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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Marcia<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Age Before Beauty<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>You need to change require to required<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Change our signature to our signatures<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Wwaving our right should be changed to waiving<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Overtaken glee should use a different word, (tempered, overshadowed, diminished)<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I especially liked the last line’s impact.Enjoyable, humorous, poignant. I am holding you and your family in mmy thoughts upon the passing of your mother. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cleora,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Go Greenish<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I didn’t like the title much.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Suggestions: Greenlight—Go! The phrase “It’s my mother-in-law didn’t make sense to me. I think you should drop the last paragraph. It doesn’t add anything to the story. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I liked the rest of the story.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Leonard,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Not Exactly A Guide Dog<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Well written, good insight into the vaguaries of low vision. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Sally Rosenthal<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Loving LLawrence<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>This is a good intro or foreword to introduce your journal. Well written, <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I am assuming you will now start your journaling portion of the book. <o:p></o:p></p></div></body></html>