<div style="font-size:10pt;font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;color:black;"><div style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:10pt;color:black;">Thanks Marcia,<br><br><br><br><br>-----Original Message-----<br>From: Marcia Wick <marciajwick@gmail.com><br>To: Leonard Tuchyner <tuchyner5@aol.com><br>Cc: Critique Group 1 <group1@bluegrasspals.com><br>Sent: Thu, Sep 28, 2017 11:45 am<br>Subject: [Critique Group 1] internal dialogue punctuation<br><br></div>
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