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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>## Forward<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Deanna<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I like the way that you set the scene of the time that the book takes place. Specifics like Birth Control pills just becoming on the market and the mention of social change put the reader in the atmosphere of the book.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I like the parallels between the young dog guide user and the dog guide, both growing and maturing. This forward does what it is meant to do. It tells the reader what the book is about and also sets up the argument about the value and cost involved with training a dog guide. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>There is a space run at the beginning of the paragraph that starts with "A dog guide can be so much more than a mobility aid to a blind person."<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>## Phillip's Burden<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Cleora<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>This is a cute story. It demonstrates the importance of good communication between children and adults. Phillip thought the store owner believed that he had meant to steal the toy. This caused him to avoid going to that store for a year. It was a nice resolution when he had to explain his sister's actions.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>## A Day with Dad<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Marcia<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The dialogue in this piece works really well. You managed to make what could be a sad and frustrating experience pleasant and at times humorous. I really like your dad's view on the bathroom situation. I also was amused by his inserting the quote on his tea mug into the headlines of the newspaper.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I found two lines with space runs.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Poised at the opposite end of the breakfast table, my 92-year-old dad nibbles toast and sips his morning tea while I settle my guide dog and set up my laptop.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Look between tea and while.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>that girl has a problem. Look, look at her face.”<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Look between look and at.<o:p></o:p></p></div></body></html>